The old
man’s wristwatch apprised him to get up. It was the most anticipated time of
his day, every day. Spurning the early cold winter morning, he got up from his
iron cot and briskly wrapped himself in a thin woolen rug. He was eager to know
what he was going to unveil, see and hear. He walked, the fastest he could with
a walking stick in his left hand bolstering him. The corridor was empty, rest
of the people were still snoring. He crossed the corridor slyly, trying not to
make any sound to reach the common hallway. It was silent and empty, just as he
wanted it to be. Reaching the telephone, placed near the window, he picked up
the receiver and dialed the number. It rang thrice before it was picked up at
the other end.
“Hello. Is
it you?”
“Yes, It’s me” the old man replied.
She, on
hearing his voice on the other end, was elated. “You will never miss calling
me, won’t you?”
“Never” the
old man said sanguinely.
She was
glad to hear that. Clearing her throat, the woman asked, “So - what do see, today?”
***
Malhar’s
phone rang beside his bed. Why is a good
sleep so unaffordable for me? He thought and lazily picked up the call.
“Sir, Geko here.
Sorry to disturb you but there’s a woman at the gate, says she wanted to meet
you…”
“Ah yes,
please let her in. I’ll be there in a moment”
Malhar jumped
from the bed. He was going to meet her after a long time. Looking himself at
the mirror, he could tell he was excited. He quickly sprinted to meet her. His
first love was just behind the door. He opened it. He was speechless for a few
seconds and then he recoiled himself.
“Welcome
Alimah, good to see you, again, after such a long time.”
“Thank you.
Same here, Malhar”
The
excitement was mutual. The affection was mutual.
“Let’s have a cup of coffee?” Malhar asked.
“Absolutely”
she smiled. Her eyes were scintillating.
***
The old man
looked out of the window and narrated “The outsides look as beautiful as
always, thick trees till the farthest you could look, open blue sky and I can
hear the morning birds chirping musically and there are butterflies coloring
the scene. Everything looks peaceful except this young girl, she is running.
Oh! She looks so much like you. And she’s running behind a falling kite. Off
she goes into the woods…”
“That
sounds beautiful. Can you still see her?”
“Well, I
can see the kite, stuck on a tree. And the girl is trying to grab it.”
“Ah! I hope
she gets what she loves”
“I think
she might, because, now I see a young, handsome guy trying to help her. The
brave chap has climbed up the tree. The girl looks completely impressed”
“I am sure,
she is” the woman smiled.
***
“Nice
coffee.”
Alimah took
a sip.
“It’s
regular, actually. I suppose, it’s the company.” Malhar gulped, surprised by
his own instant reply.
“Ahem! So,
Malhar, when did you start this service? Who inspired you?”
“I always
wanted to do something good for the society, apart from my routine work. So, I
thought this would be a good cause to invest the money my father had left to me.”
Malhar explained.
“I really
appreciate what you are doing, Malhar. Why don’t you show me around?”
“Yes, I’ll
do that and also, introduce you to all the members. But, before that, let me
take to the main hall. I want you to see someone very special here and the
reason why I wanted to meet you. Follow me”
“I am
excited. Let’s go.”
Malhar
walked her into hall and whispered, pointing near the window. “There he is, on
the phone call, wait here.”
***
“And, what do you see?” The old man asked, curiously.
“The street
looks peaceful as well. There are a lot lesser vehicles today. A lot lesser
morning people rushing to their work…”
The old man
chuckled. “Of course, who would go to work on a Sunday?”
The sudden realization
made the woman tap her forehead. “Oh! Stupid me, How bad my memory has become at
keeping track of days…”
“Curse your
memory later and tell me something interesting”
“Okay. Let me
see. Did I tell you about the new corner tea stall? I heard the ginger tea is
really appetizing. The stall is always full of people. And, a lovely couple
just walked down there, holding hands, sipping their morning tea, enjoying the
ecstasy, said to be hidden in these small experiences. They look amazing
together.”
“I wish, I
could –“, the old man paused.
“You wish –
what?”
“I must
hang up the phone now. I guess people are
waking up, here. I will call you tomorrow, same time.”
“I will be waiting.
Take care”
The phone call was cut. The old man slyly walked back to his room.
***
“Who is
that man? Who was he talking to?” Alimah asked.
“I
called you here, at this odd time, because, this is what I wanted to show you”
“Years
ago, this man and the woman on the other side were in love. But, back then, people
were more orthodox. She was married before the old man could even ask for it.
And, till today, he regrets what he has missed all these years. After a long
treasure hunt, he found her number, only to find out that she now lives with
her children and probably serves them. He was also alone all his life, so he
joined our old age home.
He
calls her every morning and they narrate to each other beautifully crafted stories,
fiction of course, which they pretend as if is happing just outside their
windows, trying to make each other happy.”
Alimah’s
eyes were watery. “Such an Immortal love, just like I wish to have, I don’t know what to say”
“Say
‘yes’”. Malhar prompted.
“Yes
to what?” Alimah rubbed her eyes.
“To my proposal. Will you be my Immortal Love?”
Malhar
was on his knees.
“Yes!”
Alimah jumped and passionately embraced him and whispered in his ears, “Let’s
celebrate this at my favorite spot.”
“And,
what is that?”
“It’s
a small tea stall. They serve amazing ginger tea.” Alimah replied.
***
- Ashish
Written for
A Platinum day of Love contest
Written for
A Platinum day of Love contest
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