While writing this rhyme,
hope I create no fuss.
I have been cherishing you,
as you walked all over the campus.
Let me capture your fluid beauty,
hope you don’t refuse.
I propose to you, one simple deal;
will you be my muse?
***
Can I be your abacus,
on which you can count on?
Let me enter your story
and bring into your life, a new dawn.
To be there for one another,
for a vow that has no end.
I propose to you, one yummy meal;
will you be my friend?
***
Is it your unusual name,
I want to scribble on a misty glass?
Or is it your ivory teeth,
that makes every melancholy surpass?
Yours hands may get dirty,
so let me be your glove
I propose to you, on my kneel;
will you be my love?
***
-Ashish
-Ashish
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thanks Vishal.
DeleteLovely Dude...
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Deletebe assured ur lady love will be clean bowled with these awesome lines!!
ReplyDeleteShe hasn't read this yet.. :D
DeleteOn wait! there is no 'She' :D
Nice composition.
ReplyDeletethanks, Sir.
DeleteInteresting bit about scribbling on misty glass!
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that was a lovely poem...
Deletethanks for sharing it here :)
lovely :)
ReplyDeletethanks. Keep visiting...
DeleteNice one bro ! liked the rhythm and flow !
ReplyDeleteThanks.. . bro :P
DeleteBeautiful..I had this poster long time back, you brought the memories back
ReplyDeleteok. glad I could do that...
Deletethanks :)
Lovely poem !
ReplyDeleteCan I be your abacus,
on which you can count on?
:)
If you are asking me that question...tehn yes, you can be :P :D
Deletethanks.
That was a cute, and a very different proposal :)
ReplyDeleteCan I be your abacus,
on which you can count on? .......A very unique line! Hatts off ^_^>
Shukriya Bushra ji... :)
Deletenice poem...
ReplyDeletethanks Hitesh...
Deleteclean bowled.. lol.. romantically interesting.. can i be your abacus.. wow.. very well written.. loved it.. :-)
ReplyDelete:) thanks a lot...
Deletevery nice poem, vishal. counting on abacus was simply innocent and romantic.
ReplyDeleteinnocent, yes. :)
Deletethanks..
absolutely beautiful---yes the lady will be clean bowled
ReplyDeleteI propose to you, one simple deal;
will you be my muse?
simple and beautiful
:')
Deletethanks Rajni.
The lady doesn't know this...yet. :D
What a way to propose !!! Keep us posted about her reply ;)
ReplyDeleteShe doesn't know this yet.. that's the catch. :D
DeleteOh! thats lovely :)
ReplyDeletethankyou, Namrota :)
DeleteThe picture reminded me of the Hallmark cards era. The poem speaks of innocence and love. Keep them coming.
ReplyDeleteI propose to you, on my kneel...beautiful lines
DeleteThanks a lot mynascene and Farah... :)
DeleteLovely Poem!!!
ReplyDeletethanks :)
DeleteOhw!! That's a sweet and lovely poem Ashish!! ^_^
ReplyDeleteeverybody loved it...except the one who should've liked it :D
Deleteyour blog is full of love, innocence, & humour..
ReplyDeleteThis proposal is a blessing to that girl.
one can actually imagine that moment. :-)