They decided to meet at a very lonely street. The drizzling made the night even more romantic.
He brought her close to himself. He took in her aroma.
His next move made her desires light up. His insides were filled with her scent.
He held her gently and kissed her.
She was his last cigarette.
-Ashish
Ha ha....awesome post Ashsih :) This one and that mosquito one-u are so good at 55 fictions!! Liked it to the core ^_^
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Bushra... :)
DeleteKeep reading.
Oh that was an interesting read. Smoking is injurious to health and thank god that he left it!
ReplyDeleteactually, after that last one... he died :D
DeleteVery well done. Enjoyed it thoroughly. I tripped on the word "aroma" because it kind of signals that "she" is not human, very cleverly leads up to the finish.
ReplyDeletewow thanks for that detailed comment.
Deletegives this post much more value.
living his last breathe..but with a cigg.
ReplyDeleteand defining it like a person.
conclusion -
cigg is very imp. to that guy..lol..:-D
Great creation..... Keep it up.........
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That is nice tribute to the white stick
ReplyDeleteSmart way to spread the message -'Quit smoking!'
ReplyDeleteLovely work!