Monday, November 21, 2011

Poem: A dream


Hello reader,













I saw a dream last night. It was very beautiful.
Expressing the same in this poem...

                                                        "Standing on the edge
of the roof,
that girl,
in white gown,
was holding a white flower.

She was plucking the petals
and the breeze carried them.
The petals flew down,
to the ground,
like droplets of shower.

There were no more left,
petals and hopes.
She decided to cross the threshold,
the voice inside her said.
The droplets falling down,
were now tears.

Then out of the dark,
like a dream, she saw a light,
a hand that wiped her tears,
pulled her to a safe place,
and assured,
no more fears."

That's all folks. :)

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-Ashish

18 comments:

  1. Who came in the end . God or a guy ?

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    1. A guy ...according to my dream... :D
      or yes, as you said... it could be God, who showed her the way and then she decided not to die. :P
      Thanks.

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  2. "Who came in the end . God or a guy ?" Hey might've been a girl too ;)
    Hope,thats what life is all about. Thanks for sharing :)

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    1. Thanks... :)
      yeah... just have to be positive and wait :)

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  3. Lovely!....Got the feeling of watching a scene in the movie....Beautifully penned!

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    1. thanks a lot.
      and do check the corrections i made in haiku..

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  4. That's sweet.
    I had a nightmare, last night. :(

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    1. Thanks...

      Nightmares are even good. Because when you wake up...you have this 'Thankgod that was just a nightmare' feeling.
      After a dreams ends...you wish it to be reality.. :D

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  5. Wow. Lovely. I hope somebody goes about saving the damsels in distress~

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    1. Thanks. Sure... We still have good people alive...:)

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