Sunday, November 17, 2013

Fiction 55: Hide and Seek



Horns were honking. The traffic was stagnant.
Holding uniform flags, the swarm was clamant.
My camera’s lenses captured a kohl-eyed beauty.
Our eyes couldn’t stop playing hide and seek.
Then, her obscure gesture invited a loud eruption.
She won. She was lost forever in that unpleasant reek.
The romantic season changed. It was then political. 

19 comments:

  1. Lovely as always! The transmission between love at first sight and political life has been beautifully portrayed! :)

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    1. thanks Bushra. :)
      Hope you enjoyed the story.

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  2. Lovely lines ! I like how you inserted the twists with hide and seek in your post ...keep writing :)

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  3. Oh wow.. unexpected end. Excellent Ashish. :)

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  4. Lovely twist! Beautiful writing Ashish :)

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