Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Fiction-55: Last Wish



In his last moments, the old man only expected one last call from his ignorant NRI son. As a father, he fulfilled all his demands.

In return, he received only tyranny.

The phone astonishingly rang beside his pillow.
“Hello! Customer, our new tariff plans…”
a voice said.

With unfulfilled wish, the old man stopped breathing. 

15 comments:

  1. very well written, Ashish! and sadly true.

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  2. dats really sad :(....but a tru fact !!! well conceived f-55

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  3. Very poignant and well written....the emotions are right there... well done

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  4. That is the anguish felt in today's parents at old age.

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