Sunday, January 13, 2013

Haiku: Use Me






Hello Reader,

Hope you like my first Haiku.


Men, for a change, Use Me

and let feminism be virgin,

cries an empty dustbin. 

-Ashish

14 comments:

  1. Expression and meaning is lovely! But make a check on syllable count :)

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    1. I made the corrections.
      Thanks a lot for finding the mistake... :)

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    2. Hope it is correct now 5-7-5.. ?

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    1. thanks Sudha :)
      and thats why I like Haiku so much.. U can say so much in so less words.

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  3. Wow -superb. Have seen this sign so many times, such Haiku never struck me.
    Great, you have given me a new line of thinking. When i look at pictures, I only think of Wordless Wednesdays, not Haiku.
    From now on, Haiku gets added to my list.

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    1. thankyou for appreciating Viyoma :)
      Ya, haiku is really a great form of expressing things..short, deep and meaningful.
      Keep reading...

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